grumpy(Original Message)Sent: 4/18/2002 10:19 PM
he went to a place
he had gone to before
he always felt welcome,
it was always an open door.
the room was full of his dear friends,
and some he had not met.
his future was about to change,
he did not know it yet.
quietly she changed his life
when she whispered in his ear
he felt a lot of different things,
among then hope and fear.
she gave to him the happiness
that he had never known.
she was most important now,
her needs above his own.
he sensed her feelings growing deep
and he had felt them too.
he really longed to hear her say
"i'm falling in love with you".
he tried to make her feel loved,
in his presence she was safe.
they began to fall in love,
and then she began to chafe.
and then one day she pulled away,
he never found out why.
you may see him smile and laugh,
but all he wants to do is cry.
his life is on a different path
and alone this path he'll walk.
he knows that they could work it out,
if only she would talk.
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From: §tổr๓ý Gõddέ§§ (ME) Sent: 4/19/2002 1:15 AM
*HUGS* That was sooooooooooooooo beautiful
From: LaurenR_1 - - - - Sent: 4/19/2002 1:24 AM
awwwwwwwww that is great hon.....
We have soooo many talented writers among us.
From: catherine47 - - - - Sent: 4/20/2002 11:54 AM
 Grumpy that was so awesome you have a gift as many other of our chat friends poems they have shared writing. It made me cry moved me to tears awwww so beautiful such emotion depth of feeling. love  cath
From: mbfish39 - - - - Sent: 4/21/2002 11:25 PM
Sometimes what we want to see from others is not possible. The ability to Love or recieve Love is not always in our control. We can do all we think is right and needed and still fall short of being what the other person needs.
I have spent years trying to figure out how I can Love someone enough to make them Love me in return and you know what I have discovered? I can't. It is beyond my control to win someone's heart. I have drifted over the years in an abyss of nothingness, numb to the sights and sounds of Love around me.
But I am tired now of drifting. I have planted my feet firmly on the ground and I will bravely look Love in the face and say "give it your best shot". I will not turn and walk away or hide my face when Love looks my way. I will embrace it......for I do not know how long it will last. It may be for a moment or a lifetime.......but I will accept it next time it comes my way. For I am worthy of Love and I will be a better person because of it.
MB (mbfish39)
From: monalisa - - - - Sent: 4/22/2002 8:45 AM
Hang in there Jay.....life is so hard and unfair at times. Look to the Lord to help you heal....and he will surely bring you the love you deserve. That was a beautiful and heartfelt poem, may I use it and say I wrote it??? lol....:-)
LaurenR_1 - - - - Sent: 4/22/2002 12:03 PM
Wow....
No truer words were ever spoken.
We should all adopt that philosophy.
Though even with pain...
It is better to love if only for a short while than never to have it.
From: Môôή£ïgђt ξ Ðέ£igђt (ME) - - - - Sent: 4/22/2002 1:56 PM
I do agree with that!!! The feeling itself is wonderful when Love is present. We all go through our good times and bad times. Pain only strengthens us even more
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From: LoneJakylSent: 4/24/2002 4:10 PM
wow - ya'll are SAPS!! reminds me of the state I was in before I went to hopless romantic rehab and got fixed!!!
Life is fairly simple - not complicated as everyone tends to make it out to be. From love, life comes, from life, death comes, therefore to Love is Death! We just have to make sure we have fun with while it lasts, but what happens once you've had your fair share of love, you guessed it -Death!! Its an endless cycle and we have no power against it. As I said before - its a futile war, get out while you can and run just as fast as you can!!!!! http://www.alancontino.com/philosophies/battleofsexes.html Preaching the bad news, Your Own, Alan |
Friday, April 19, 2002
I wrote a poem! Hope you like it! By Grumpy
Thursday, April 18, 2002
She let's go
From: LaurenR_1 (Original Message) - - - - Sent: 4/18/2002 7:18 AM
She finally realizes
He will never be hers.
She finally accepts
the finality.
She has suffered enough
holding onto dead dreams.
She opens her hands up
and watches as the dove flies off
soaring higher and higher,
farther and farther away from her
With a tear rolling down her cheek
She finally lets go.
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Lauren 4 -18 - 02
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From: LongDrinkWater35 - - - - Sent: 4/18/2002 11:42 AM
I wanted to respond to this....as many of you already know, I am the "infamous subject" of these beautiful pieces of writing. I want to speak in two realms here....first, I was fortunate to grow up around Writers/Journalists...and these Works by Lauren show a Passion and a Flare that only comes from deep within the soul of a great Writer. Someday I hope to go by a Border's and see some of her Works on a rack. Second, let me just not sound trite when I say that the "failure" of the relationship of Lauren and I belonged solely to Me. Lauren is a wonderful woman, full of the love for life that we all should cherish and admire. I hope each of you gets to know her better, and learns from this "Teacher Of Life". Now, with that, comes my "inability" to continue in this Room. I've said, even "threatened", that many times. But, in the end, it needs to happen. As the dove so eloquently flew away in that beautiful piece of prose, so must I. Thank you all....especially you Lauren.
Chris
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Lauren.......this one sounds soooo much better......healthier somehow :-)))From: hotsexykitty13 - - - - Sent: 4/18/2002 4:23 PM
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Thank you Chris,From: LaurenR_1 - - - - Sent: 4/19/2002 7:05 AM
for such nice words.
And for being my inspiration and my "rock" through some extremely difficult days.
Thank you.......you know what for.
Lauren
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Monday, April 15, 2002
She Misses him
From: LaurenR_1(Original Message)Sent: 4/15/2002 12:41 PM
She whispers in the Dark
But he cannot hear her words
She gently strokes the pillow where his head should be laying
But he cannot feel her hand.
Her heart sinks whenever she hears his voice or feels his presence
But he does not know it
Her tears fall quietly down her cheeks as she remembers him (his hands) caressing her face
But he cannot see them.
She misses him.
4 -15 -02
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ŠẹХΨŠωèéΤhЗã®Τ - - - - Sent: 4/15/2002 6:15 PM
awe, that is sad Lauren
Kristi Elliott
reddog4lifeSent: 4/16/2002 4:44 PM
great poem lauren . although im sorry you are feeling such pain. i hope things get better,soon,for you smile sweety you're a beautiful person
 hope to see ya at the party lauren till the next time
terry/reddog
catherine47 - - - - Sent: 4/20/2002 10:08 AM
Through words in this poem her pain is felt
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and shared. For those who love 
Friday, April 12, 2002
His Sacrifice (4/12/02)
From: LaurenR_1 (Original Message)Sent: 4/12/2002 3:51 PM
She kneels before him with outstretched hands
offering up her heart to him
He turns his head with tears in his eyes
for he cannot accept her most unselfish gift.
He must go off into battle to fight his most viscious enemy (himself)
not knowing if he'll ever return to the one
who loves him
unconditionally,selflessly,wholeheartedly.
Knowing there is no other like her,
He makes the ultimate sacrifice.
He closes his eyes and holds her close to his heart
as he walks toward his destiny,
leaving her brokenhearted on the floor.
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Lauren 4-12-02 3:51pm
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From: Catherine47 - - - - 4/12/02 9:48pm
Lauren this is beautiful so very elequently written too ty for sharing your friend cath says
From: MΪ§§¤ß‡ТÇђέТТέ™ (ME) - - - - Sent: 4/13/2002 1:39 AM
I Say that Lauren did a very beautiful job at this heartfelt poem. It actually made me cry... |
Sunday, March 31, 2002
Eagles in Flight
| Mar 31, '02 4:10 AM by môôήlïgђt-ðέligђt
Eagles in Flight with Angels
Flying high above the clouds with their wings spread wide,
The Eagles flew in numbers across the sky.
Traveling through some distant lands.
How happy they are flying amongst the
Angels that are guiding them home.
Home to where freedom lies with in their
wings.
Soaring through Heaven and back again.
What wonderful creatures.
Eagles and Angels, Each special in their own way. |
Thursday, March 21, 2002
River OF Tears
River OF Tears
Hidden Deep within the Eyes,
Beyond the happiness,
Beyond the soul,
Lies a river of sorrow,
Of tears shed through out the years,
Broken promises,
Hurtful words tearing at the very heart of us all...
Utter lonliness at the thought of a loved one departed.
Hopelessness that will rip apart our very souls.
These things brings sadness into the deepest part of our souls...
Causing this river of tears.
So if happiness comes your way,
Treasure it as the most precious gift of life...
For it just may be the cure that will dry up that river,
Lying deep with in all of us...
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From: reddog4life - - - - 3/21/02
i thought it was great good work .thanks for the moment.
reddog
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Saturday, February 16, 2002
The Heart By Cath
catherine47 (Original Message)Sent: 2/16/2002 2:56 PM
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Tuesday, January 1, 2002
Moonlight's Miracle was published October of 2000. Magical Light will be published spring of 2002.
Copyright ©2001 Jane Fisher
*[a.] Sterling Heights, MI [title] "Moonlight's Miracle" [pers.] I am so glad to have been chosen for this honor. My grandma would have been very proud. She passed away on October 23 of this year. She was a marvelous storyteller and poet herself. It was her creativity that inspired me to write my own poems. I've written countless poems and short stories. This will be the first time my work will be seen by the public. I am truly blessed to have been chosen for this book. Romance is my favorite topic, for I never run out of ideas. I dedicate this poem to my beloved grandmother for her guidance and inspiration.
Jane Ann Fisher
Copyright ©2001 Jane Fisher
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Stormy,
That is some good writing there if I do say so.Sorry about your Grandmother, and it is so nice of you to remember her in such a wonderful way. I am sure the rest of the members and myself would love to see more. Keep up the good work.
Beast
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From: Catherine47 - - - - 1/1/02
Stormy congratulations on having your poem published. Thier very good. You have a unique talent too. Keep up the writing always. Cathindrbnmich
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